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思路點撥

本圖描述的場景是一副令人喜聞樂見的圖畫，圖畫中，一只可愛的小豬造型的儲蓄罐，正在接住自來水里滴下來的水滴，像存錢一樣，存儲水滴。實際上，它儲存的不是水，它儲存的是幸福。我們可以看出，人們有了節(jié)水意識。但是，從正在滴水的水龍頭看，還是有人忽略了節(jié)約用水這一問題。因此，本文可以這樣寫作：
第一段：描述圖畫;第二段：分析有些人浪費水的心理，并闡述水資源的寶貴;第三段：建議措施。

思維拓展

實際上，積極正面的圖片寫作，和揭示負面現(xiàn)象的文章沒有什么本質(zhì)上的區(qū)別，只要我們筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，就能把它繼續(xù)按照原來的套路寫。

本文也可以從低碳、環(huán)保的角度出發(fā)進行寫作。

關(guān)于節(jié)約能源的話題，都可以按照這個行文思路和語言模式進行展開。

高分范文

Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource. Actually, water resource is very limited and precious. It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①. Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。

However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②. For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users. Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others. In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③. Water resource is indispensable④ not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture. And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤ when there is no more water。

Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥ this emergency, further measures still need to be taken. On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water. On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted. To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。

佳作妙譯

水資源一度被誤認為是一種無限的可再生資源，實際上，水資源是非常有限且寶貴的。有幸的是現(xiàn)在公眾開始關(guān)注這一問題了。如圖所示，一只可愛的快樂小豬存錢罐積攢著水龍頭里流出的每一滴水，就像存錢一樣。

然而，水資源短缺問題仍然威脅著全人類的生存和發(fā)展。浪費水的現(xiàn)象在日常生活中仍然隨處可見。例如，經(jīng)常有粗心大意者忘記關(guān)水龍頭。更有甚者認為自己繳了水費就有權(quán)浪費，與他人無關(guān)。事實上，水資源不僅在生活中必不可少，在工農(nóng)業(yè)生產(chǎn)中也是不可或缺的。水資源是全人類共同的財富，很難想象當沒有水的時候世界會是什么樣子。

雖然越來越多的人已經(jīng)認識到了這種緊迫性，但是仍然要采取進一步的措施。從宏觀層面上講，全世界應該共同努力反對浪費水。從微觀層面上講，要進行廣泛的宣傳活動。比如在電視臺播出關(guān)于如何節(jié)水的節(jié)目。節(jié)約用水就是存儲幸福，只有節(jié)約用水才能為子孫后代存儲更好的生活。

名師點評

① It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention: 來自于2005年閱讀真題，原句是這樣的：Fortunately, the White House is starting to pay attention。

歷年真題是一座巨大的寶庫，廣大考生一定要學會充分利用這寶貴的資源!

② 第二段開頭，用了一個轉(zhuǎn)折詞，也就是“起承轉(zhuǎn)合”中的所謂的“轉(zhuǎn)”，把這篇作文改造成了一篇社會問題型作文，也就是大家最擅長寫的作文。

③ In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it: 倒裝句，表語提前，句子倒裝。

倒裝句寫法：

第一步：寫正常原句：Water is so precious that we cannot afford to waste it。

第二步：表語precious提前。

第三步：主謂倒置，變成So precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it。

普通的so… that… 句型，也能被化腐朽為神奇，成為鉆石加分句型!

④ indispensable: 不可或缺的，替換important的一個很好的詞匯。

順便講一個英譯漢的技巧：大家可以看到，在譯文中，這句話被翻譯兩次：必不可少、不可或缺。

因為原文中出現(xiàn)了：not only… but also，所以這個單詞被拆開翻譯成了兩個近義詞，以使行文更加通順。

⑤ what the world would be like：注意賓語從句必須用陳述語序。

⑥ become aware of: 意識到。意思和用法都等同于be conscious of。后邊接詞語。

⑦ 非常重要：一般而言，歷年真題中談到的正面話題，或者人生哲理類的文章，有可能題目要求會變成：

Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

(1) describe the drawing briefly,

(2) explain its intended meaning, and then

(3) support your view with an example/examples。

也就是第三段并非發(fā)表個人評論(建議措施)，而是舉例，這時候就需要我們?nèi)フ{(diào)整一下文章的敘述方法。

這種情況下，我們可以把結(jié)尾段調(diào)整為：

Examples of people’s increasing awareness on saving water can easily be found anywhere in our life. On the macro level, the whole world is making a joint effort to fight against waste of water. On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, can be seen nearly anywhere and every day. In short, to store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。

這樣的話，結(jié)尾段就從建議措施，變成了論證文章的示例。

可見，隨機應變，對寫好考研作文也很重要。

思路點撥

圖畫中一個已經(jīng)喝得爛醉如泥的司機，車頂上還馱著一瓶巨大的啤酒，汽車卻依然在路上飛馳。雖然這幅圖有點夸張，但是它卻反映了一個觸目驚心的安全問題：醉酒駕車。寫作時可以按照以下的脈絡展開論述：

第一段：描述圖畫;第二段：分兩個分論點進行論述：提高安全意識、提高社會責任感;第三段：建議措施、強調(diào)后果。思維拓展

實際上，本文的內(nèi)容和行文思路，不僅僅適用于醉酒駕車，還適用于所有關(guān)于安全事故和社會責任的圖片話題。

例如，火災、漏油事故、施工事故、違反交規(guī)等等一系列與安全或社會責任感相關(guān)的話題，都可以參考此文。

高分范文

What a scary and sensational scene it is! In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler①, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car. What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。

The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility. For one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities. Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice. So life is to be respected and awed②. It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence (DUI)③. For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility. We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us. It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden④。

In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail. Besides, the mass media, such as TV, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。

佳作妙譯

這是一幅多么可怕的觸目驚心的場景啊!在這幅圖中，爛醉如泥的司機正在馬路上飛速行駛，車上還頂著一大瓶啤酒。這幅圖所傳達的意義，對我們國家的每一位成員，都具有現(xiàn)實和警醒的意義。

這幅栩栩如生的圖畫的深刻意義可以從安全意識和社會責任感兩個角度闡釋。一方面，安全意識應該是我首要重視的問題。生命是一次單程旅行：你不能經(jīng)歷兩次生命。所以我們應該敬重生命、敬畏生命。由于醉酒駕車的疏忽而宣告任何一條生命的結(jié)束是殘忍的、不人道的。另一方面，作為這個社會負責任的一員，我們每個人都應該去承擔社會責任。我們不僅僅是為了自己活著，我們也為那些我們所愛的和愛我們的人活著。無論是聲稱司機的、還是受害者的生命不重要，都是不負責任的。因為這會給他們的家人和親戚帶來巨大的悲痛和沉重的生活負擔。

簡言之，官方應該制定立法措施嚴厲地懲罰醉酒駕車的司機，例如吊銷駕照或進行監(jiān)禁。立法措施勢在必行。此外，電視、收音機、網(wǎng)站等大眾傳媒應該共同努力來提高公民的安全意識和責任感，以降低交通事故的發(fā)生率。

名師點評

① as drunken as a fiddler: 醉得像一個游蕩者。實際上是一個比喻，相當于漢語中的爛醉如泥。用語非常形象生動，一個酩酊大醉的司機形象躍然紙上!

② Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice：非常富有哲理性，語言優(yōu)美、地道。respected and awed: 敬重和敬畏，語言簡潔、有力、到位。

③ DUI: 醉酒駕車，也可以寫成：drunk driving。

④ leaving…:動詞的ing形式作伴隨狀語。句型經(jīng)典。