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一篇好的英語(yǔ)作文必然是由N多不錯(cuò)的美句表達(dá)構(gòu)成的,我們?cè)谡劶疤嵘⒄Z(yǔ)作文水平的時(shí)候也提到,一定要多背送一些美句,那么,何為好的美句,你再背誦及寫作的時(shí)候把我的度是什么?下面小編總結(jié)了美句構(gòu)成的5個(gè)特點(diǎn),按照這個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)走相信遣詞造句能力一定會(huì)提升。
特點(diǎn)一:整體性
句子的整體性:即能表達(dá)單獨(dú)的、完整的思想。
Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.
【分析】這個(gè)句子表達(dá)了兩層思想:1. Born in a small town出生在一個(gè)小鎮(zhèn) 2. grew up to be a musician.長(zhǎng)大成為了音樂家。這個(gè)句子應(yīng)該分成兩句來寫。除此之外,還需要增加一些信息來連接兩層思想。
【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.
特點(diǎn)二:連貫性
句子的連貫性:即能清晰地連接句子的各個(gè)部分,沒有虛假的平行結(jié)構(gòu),沒有指代不請(qǐng)的代詞,沒有不清晰的句內(nèi)關(guān)系。
Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, “good morning!”
【分析】這個(gè)句子從語(yǔ)法來講是正確的,但是句內(nèi)關(guān)系不清楚,到底誰(shuí)進(jìn)入了教室?
【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, “good morning!”
Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.
【分析】這個(gè)句子的連貫性較差,可以利用平行結(jié)構(gòu)來體現(xiàn)連貫性。
【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.
特點(diǎn)三:準(zhǔn)確性
句子的準(zhǔn)確性指句子內(nèi)部沒有不準(zhǔn)確的,不必要的詞。
Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.
【分析】這個(gè)句子感覺有故意寫長(zhǎng)之嫌,需要精簡(jiǎn)。
【提升】He returned in early August.
特點(diǎn)四:重點(diǎn)突出
好的句子應(yīng)該重點(diǎn)突出,詞的選擇,詞的重復(fù)都有助于句子的重點(diǎn)突出。
Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, “don’t move!”
【分析】這個(gè)句子比較平淡,可以修改一下動(dòng)詞。
【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, “don’t move!”
特點(diǎn)五:語(yǔ)法正確,句式多變
句式多變指句子長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合。如果全篇都是復(fù)雜的長(zhǎng)難句,文章讀起來會(huì)晦澀難懂,并且有挑釁閱卷人之嫌。反之,全篇都是短句,感覺有侮辱閱卷人之感。
Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.
【分析】這個(gè)句子不僅僅存在語(yǔ)法問題,另外還有完整性,準(zhǔn)確性問題。
【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.
如果同學(xué)們?cè)趯懢渥拥臅r(shí)候,注意以上五點(diǎn),相信大家一定能夠?qū)懗稣_,完整,準(zhǔn)確的英文句子。
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